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Đề : What motivates you the most to go studying in Singapore ?
I
have been heard a saying by my mom that : “ Study while others are
sleeping, work while others are loafing, prepare while others are
playing and dream when others are wishing.” That is why i always have to
practice, practice and practice daily to realize my dreams. And one of
my biggest dream is studying abroad in Singapore
First
of all, i would like to tell a story. When I was thirteen years old. I
realized that society was not that I thought it would be, especially my
country. Social reality today, bribery is gradually common. Those who
have money and power use it to bribe fraud in competitions . For
example, two years ago, my team participated in a dance competition in
my city, but only got the second prize even though my team danced better
than the win team, But just because the father of one of they bought
the prize so, we are not the winners. From that incident, I lost faith
in society, because I felt that society I had been living in is was
really unfair. A society where one person who has money and power can
abuse others, can crush all hopes, beliefs and hard work of others. They
think having money means having everything. For someone who loves
justice like me this is totally unacceptable.
On
the other hand, I think money is not everything. To be successful in
any field, having money is an advantage because you can use money to
study lecturers. But the key to success is not money, it is ability and
intelligence. Because you can use money to study with teacher but you
can not use it to buy knowledge. As a result, I want to be studying in
SIngapore, because I know Singapore is a nation with the lowest rates of
bribery and robbery in the world, Furthermore, this is the country with
strongest education in the continent that I am in. I firmly believe
that when I live with Singaporeans, belend in with Singaporean culture,
inherit a Singaporean education, I will understand how their country has
such a low rate of bribery and crime and I will make my country as good
as or better than theirs
Finally
, My dream, my biggest dream is to learn, to iherit the great education
that Singapore has, because it is only when I talented that I help my
country boycoot so that the society in fair
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